If you like songwriting or children give a listen.

Juice writes:

If you love small children then you'll know there is nothing more precious then a sleeping child. So here is the latest Juice original. It's in Raw/Rough form but pretty much final as far as the format goes. Next I hope to polish it up and see about what can be done to it musically.
Thanks for listening.
lowellrocks.com/mp3/1024

V1
Off to sleep little one this day is over
another day awaits tomorrow
while you sleep you can ride upon a rainbow
in your dreams go find your pot of gold
Ch
Life is always full of dreams about tomorrow
And where we'd like to be someday
In your dreams you'll make a path that you will follow
And one day you will find your pot of Gold
V2
Now don't you worry if your dream keeps on changing
What makes you happy is the way to go
And if somehow your dreams do lead you to some sorrow
Behind a tear's another Rainbow
Ch
Life is always full of dreams about tomorrow
And where we'd like to be someday
In your dreams you'll make a path that you will follow
And one day you will find your pot of Gold

Br
Someday you'll see the gift of life is always giving
The things we need to help us grow.
And if your luck should bring you the life of a child.
Then you'll know, What you Hold, Is your pot of Gold.
V3
Now off to sleep little one this day is over
another day awaits tomorrow
while you sleep you can ride upon a rainbow
in your dreams go find your pot of gold
Ch
Life is always full of dreams about tomorrow
And where we'd like to be someday
In your dreams you'll make a path that you will follow
And one day you will find your pot of Gold
A lasting treasure of your own

7/13/2008 12:23:30 PM

Kennium writes:

I love the concept of a goodnight song being sung to a child. Excellent lyrics and a pretty melody.
You really should flesh that one out with a pretty piano and some strings, maybe cellos. (just my opinion)
Good stuff Bruce.

7/13/2008 12:39:19 PM

Juice writes:

I'm with you on that Kennium. I just uploaded it to a collab site that I've had some good results with in the past. I'll let them kick it around a bit.
Thanks for listening.

7/13/2008 1:05:44 PM

Carl Ayotte writes:

Very nice Juice!

7/13/2008 1:13:20 PM

kazm writes:

I clicked on the link but cant hear anything? I am computer disfunctional i guess, can someone help a girl out?

7/13/2008 2:34:54 PM

Juice writes:

Kasm
The link should open another page with the LR media player.
You can try going to my profile and play the song listed.

Thanks CM.

7/13/2008 3:18:59 PM

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Really cool

7/13/2008 6:03:15 PM

kazm writes:

Thanks Juice! : )

7/14/2008 6:59:10 AM

Melvern Taylor writes:

Great job man!

7/14/2008 8:18:00 AM

Juice writes:

WOW! I just got an Email from a Full Time college Music Instructor of Music theory and Aural Perception.
He loves this song.

Didn't see that one coming. But I'll take it. :-)

7/16/2008 12:33:31 PM

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